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The non-text/non boarder banner I made to promote the opening of tCoS.
With text/boarder
I am really pleased with this picture. Again I was practicing on my shading and backgrounds. I tried a different angle as well for Unole, which was somewhat of a pain. So any pointers on that would be greatly appreciated :3
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactI love writing critiques, so you're in luck.
I like to star out with the top 3 pros/cons then describe the four categories.
Pro's
- Body Shading. I can tell there is a definite light source, congrats.
- The Perspective. There are a ton of elements to his, from the blurred tail to the grass.
- Anatomy. Your feline anatomy is semi-realistic, and they look like real cats. That's a hard thing to do.
Cons's
- Background. I hate to say it, but the patches of grass don't quite look like the rest of the piece.
- Sky Gradient. Oh man, I can tell that it's the sky and the colors are good, but something about it just looks different from the rest of the piece?
- Color Choice for the last Hill. I'm being specific for this part, as well the gradual blue just looks off. Perhaps a darker green blue like the hill in front of it? Maybe just combine the two?
Vision; 3.5/5. Like you said, you were trying with perspective and and I can see that. You could still use some work on it though.
Originality; 4.5/5. I love the whole piece and the idea of it being like a propaganda poster for war, advertisement ect.
Technique; 4/5. You have very good skill and used it in this piece. If not for my nit-picking I'd give you a 5/5.
Impact; 4/5. Overall is a good piece that made me smile. The quality is very nice but, like I said in the cons there are little things that could use work.